I really like this piece. I love the techno aspect of it and the tension build up in the beginning. It is very riveting and keeps you at the edge of your seat. The one problem I have with it is the ending. It just sorta leaves you hanging. If you found a way to wrap it up nicer and more smooth it would be close to a 5 probably a 4.5
Thank you for reviewing! =) Yeah this is a WIP at the moment, I probably should've included that in title and not just description, hehe.^^ It will definitely be longer and more polished in future! ;)
I must say this is the best piece of yours I've heard so far and it oddly reminds me of Kuja's theme from Final Fantasy 9...a little
It's ok. It just doesn't seem like it reaches a particular climax. It definitely feels like we are missing what makes this piece whole. I think you should finish it because it is pretty decent. It seems like you are creating so I would like to see what your creativity can do to stretch the song further and wrap it up nicely at the end. I give it a 2.5 right now, but I think you can get it close to a 4. And don't take a 2.5 from me like it's bad or its the end. I'm just a tough grader. Regardless, I'don't still like to see the end result so I think you should definitely finish it and make it a longer song.
Read the description, you just did the opposite of what you want.
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