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I have a hunch you will place in Nate's competition

Sylux03 responds:

Oh thank you. :) I hope I will.

Ape escape meets pokemon diamond/pearl

EspiDev responds:

maybeee

Honestly it feels more like trance or DNB. My advice would be since you're getting back into more bass stuff, shoot for dnb/breakbeat/distro. I would use what you have now as part of the middle of the song. I think you should create a good intro. The key is to get a girl drumline down. Always start slow. The easiest thing to do is take the beat you got already but just space out the kick and the snare/clap So the hats can work in the groove. I would try to mix it up though through the song and let your creativity run wild. If you have a completely different idea that may seem almost separate from what you're trying to accomplish here, see if you can make it work. There really aren't any wrong answers in music. Do something that's unique. I think you have a good start it's just you need to build around it a little. Don't be afraid about length. It might seem like you've hit a wall but just open your mind to new things you would never think of and I'm sure you'll strike gold and everything will click one after the other! :) I find it sorta ironic you named it break through, because I think you're ready to have a break through with this song once you finish it 👍 again it's just a little advice and opinion. You can take it or leave it. Last time I have an honest opinion the guy got mad and voted 0 for half my songs xD I'm literally just trying to help because I know how it is when you start making something and you don't have any clue where it's going and you run things over and over through your head and nothing seems to work. Sometimes I just start new songs and if I wind up finishing that song I come back to it and all of a sudden something hits me. And again what you have here is good so far. Just challenging you to go the distance and make something GREAT out of it

VernCarson responds:

Dude....I think I love you. Thanks for the honest review. Seriously. I'm gonna take all this into consideration and make something awesome. Thanks!

Also I gotta say it's kind of interesting you mention it should be breakbeat because it WAS breakbeat at one point. Good ear, my man.

I really like this piece. I love the techno aspect of it and the tension build up in the beginning. It is very riveting and keeps you at the edge of your seat. The one problem I have with it is the ending. It just sorta leaves you hanging. If you found a way to wrap it up nicer and more smooth it would be close to a 5 probably a 4.5

backwardecho responds:

Thank you for reviewing! =) Yeah this is a WIP at the moment, I probably should've included that in title and not just description, hehe.^^ It will definitely be longer and more polished in future! ;)

Thanks again!

I must say this is the best piece of yours I've heard so far and it oddly reminds me of Kuja's theme from Final Fantasy 9...a little

It's ok. It just doesn't seem like it reaches a particular climax. It definitely feels like we are missing what makes this piece whole. I think you should finish it because it is pretty decent. It seems like you are creating so I would like to see what your creativity can do to stretch the song further and wrap it up nicely at the end. I give it a 2.5 right now, but I think you can get it close to a 4. And don't take a 2.5 from me like it's bad or its the end. I'm just a tough grader. Regardless, I'don't still like to see the end result so I think you should definitely finish it and make it a longer song.

Norato responds:

Read the description, you just did the opposite of what you want.

Have only one problem and it is that I think you could've put more work into the bass. Other than that...pretty nice.

It's a little repetitive and lacks fullness, but it does have a nice hip hop beat to it. The little bridge in three middle gives it a nice break before it gets back into the main rhythm.

etK responds:

Thanks for your review ^-^

It's alright. It has a nice melody, just a little repetitive.

BeeFef responds:

I know, it isn't my best song. All my songs are a bit repetitive. Thanks for the review, though!

It's pretty good, but I honestly think it would be better if it wasn't about burgers and fries. I just don't seem to find the relevance. Sounds like nice background music to a video game due to its repetition. In my opinion some repetition is good. This track has a nice Balance of repitition and creativity. It just lacks a wow factor for me and ends on a weird note, almost like a cliffhanger. I think it should have a little more at the end to wrap up the burger for the next customer ;)

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